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TinglingWhats wrong?
It's just a whisper.
Just a whisper, just a pleasant tingling
Not down there
But up here
Inside my head

Whats so bad?
It's just a crinkle
Just a crinkle, just a pleasant tingling
Nothing weird.
Just bliss
Inside my head

Why not?
It's just a tap
Just a tap, just a pleasant tingling
It's not erotic
Just a gift
Inside my head

Why not?
It's just a community
Just a wonderful community, who all share in the same pleasant tingling
We're not freaks,
Just like you except we get a special feeling
Inside our heads

Whats wrong?
It's just a tingle
Just a tingle , just a pleasant tingling
Not down there
Just up here
Inside our

Attention SeekerI hear it and cringe
The sting of the words on my ears
as they fling they're cold words at her
"Stop trying to get attention"
"Stupid girl. Always looking for attention"
"Pathetic. Worthless. Attention seeker"
Aimed at another
but caught in the crossfire.

A note in a song
Cheery but so sad in truth
a deceptively happy tune, hiding reality
They look at me.
"Oh my god, you don't cut do you?"
A look of utter disgust, hatred.
"Of course not"
I mutter, a truth so dark.

They wouldn't understand
Besides, I'm not like all of them.
I'm not going to do something that dumb.
"I'm not an attention seeker"
"Good, it would be pathetic if you were"
"Yeah,

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Nina-chanby =Raiyenn

Fan Art / Manga & Anime / Digital / Movies & TV

©2012-2013 =Raiyenn

A little bit of mamotte lollipop fanart! I love Nina heheheh... she's so pretty!!!!

Critique by ~MineWizar Nov 16, 2012, 8:26:02 PM

Hello, I'm MineWizar, and I will now review this deviation.

Vision: I like the shading and the looks, but the smile, I must say looks too creepy; makes you feel.... suspicious. Four stars for this.

Originality: Originality is very nice, including the appearance, and the clothes, and the unique long, long hair. Five stars.

Technique: The technique you put into this is great, could possibly use the slightest bit of practice and I'll give you five stars, but four and a half stars will do.

Impact: The impact on the viewer knows that the girl is happy and that the girl is waiting for a surprise. Four and a half stars for this.

All-In-All: Very great!

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~unycorn Nov 17, 2012 Student Writer

this look just amazing! though....the smile .O.

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=Raiyenn Nov 17, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

veryyy creepy isn't it xDDD it was an accident.

btw, i made a bunch of plz accs for my charcter, Hoshie... she's an eevee

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~unycorn Nov 17, 2012 Student Writer

most awesome Plz account (( in my opinion xD ))! and hahahaaha well accident happens xD

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=Raiyenn Nov 17, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

yeahh...

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~unycorn Nov 17, 2012 Student Writer

:3

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=Raiyenn Nov 17, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

i burned my tongue REALLY badly....
btw...your bday is tuesday...right?

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~unycorn Nov 17, 2012 Student Writer

yep and yours is on Monday x3

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=Raiyenn Nov 17, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

yuppppppp *giggles* I'm soooo excited. my friend told me to stop at her locker before 1st period on monday... i wonder why?

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~Emizi Nov 17, 2012 General Artist

daww so cute~! >w<

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=Raiyenn Nov 17, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

tyyyyy

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